Sharpen the collaboration and timeline section

• Add a clearly labelled “Rollout plan with client name” slide:
  • Milestones (e.g., scope sign-off, sprint 1 start, pilot start). Meeting notes · kickoff call, 14 Mar …
  • Ownership clarity: who on their side is expected to weigh in (and when).
• Show the first 2–3 sprints as a timeline so they can see when real artefacts land.

Make it more client-specific

• Swap generic examples for their own journeys (e.g., core flows, key pages, or user segments) so they immediately recognise their product in the story.
• Use their terminology consistently (names for roles, plans, features), and show at least one slide that mirrors their current UI before juxtaposing your proposed direction.

Polish for clarity and persuasion

• Aim for one idea per slide with a strong headline that reads as a takeaway, not a label (e.g., “Modular front-ends let us ship faster with less risk” vs. “Architecture”).
• Reduce dense bullets; turn processes into simple diagrams or step flows, and show screens or wireframes instead of paragraphs when you can.
• Add a short “Summary & next steps” slide at the end: 3–4 bullets summarising value, plus the concrete decision or approval you’re asking for.

If you’d like to paste or attach a rough outline of the Tesserine deck (just slide titles + 1–2 bullets per slide), I can give much more targeted suggestions, including specific slide rewrites and a tailored list of “likely questions per slide.”